采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。
If a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why? First,I would like to take my friend to my school,because there was a lot of interesting place in our school.In my school,the most beautiful place is the big Lawn.W