2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强。

If a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown，what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why? First,I would like to take my friend to my school,because there was a lot of interesting place in our school.In my school,the most beautiful place is the big lawn.When class over,students like to go to zhe big lawn to feel the native.