2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

可适当增加从句的使用；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇量偏小，另外文章有些单词拼写错误。

If a foreign friend of me is going to visit your hometown，what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why? First,I would like to take my friend to my school,because there was a lot of interesting place in our school.In my school,the most beautiful place is the big lawn.Students like to go to the big lawn to feel the native when class over,you can found zhe grass grow in the big lawn,to smell the fragrance from the grass.