采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。
If a foreign friend of me is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place I would like to take him/her to see and why? First,I would like to take my friend to my school,because there was a lot of interesting place in our school.In my school,the most beautiful place is the big lawn.Students like to go to the big lawn to feel the native when class over.The grass growing in the big lawn,so you can smell the fragrance from the grass.And you can also lay on the grass to see the bird was flying in the sky,