采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了。
If a foreign friend of me is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place I would like to take him/her to see and why? First,I would like to take my friend to my school,because there was a lot of interesting place in our school.In my school,the most beautiful place is the big lawn.Students like to go to the big lawn to feel the native when class over.The grass growing in the big lawn,so you can smell the fragrance from the grass.And you can also lay on the grass to see the bird was flying in the sky,white cloud moved from the sky. If my friend want to know something history and culture about our country,I can take my friend to the library in my school.