2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。

If a foreign friend of me is going to visit your hometown，what is the most interesting place I would like to take him/her to see and why? First,I would like to take my friend to my school,because there was a lot of interesting place in our school.In my school,the most beautiful place is the big lawn.Students like to go to the big lawn to feel the native when class over.The grass growing in the big lawn,so you can smell the fragrance from the grass.And you can also lay on the grass to see the bird flying in the sky,white cloud moved from the sky. If my friend wants to know the history and culture about our country,I can take my friend to the library in my school.You can learn a lot of knowledge in the library, So that you would be more adapt to the country you wants to go.