近年来全球许多国家对公共场所吸烟限制越来越严;从2007年1月1日起,我国香港地区室内全面禁烟。针对这个问题,你班同学组织一场辩论会,请你根据下表内容,以“Ban Smoking in Pubic Places?”为题,写一篇短文,客观介绍双方的不同观点。
3、 公共场所禁烟有利于督促吸烟者戒烟。
3、 导致失业。
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Ban Smoking in public places? Smoking bans can be seen in public places in many countries. Our class had a heated discussion on banning smoking in public places. Opinions fall into two. Some students agree that smoking is dangerous, Not only does smoking harm smokers themselves but also harm the people around them. Bans in public places would also urge smokers to smoke less or give it up. However, Others hold an opposite view. They believe that it's legal to smoke and smokers should have the freedom and right to smoke in any place they like. Besides, bans on smoking in public places would drive many bars, pubs or clubs out of business. What's worse, many people will be out of job because of this.