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It is necessary and important for people to keep a good mood in their daily life in this fast-paced modern society. First of all, today's society is full of competition and develops very quickly. As a result, there is a lot of pressure on everyone. People usually feel stressed as they try hard to do their best in education, career or family situations.So, It is very important that they should keep a good mood. A cheerful person is likely to be optimistic when he or she faces challenges and competitions and is likely to succeed. Even when he or she meets a difficult situation, if he or she keeps a good mood and is cool-headed, they can use their intelligence to solve the problem. On the contrary, a bad-tempered person . will only make things worse when problems arise. All in all, the ability to keep a good mood is important for people in modern society.
