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2003年专业四级英语作文真题:保持好心情

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:19浏览次数:3977
要求:
题目 The importance of keeping a good mood.
说明 People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: The importance of keeping a good mood.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

用户练习作文:

The importance of keeping a good mood It is necessary and important for people to keep a good mood in their daily life in this fast-paced modern society. First of all, today's society is full of competition and develops very quickly. As a result, there is a lot of pressure on everyone. People usually feel stressed as they try hard to do their best in education, career or family situations.So, it is very important that they should keep a good mood. A cheerful person is likely to be optimistic when he or she faces challenges and competitions and is likely to succeed. Even when he or she meets a difficult situation, if he or she keeps a good mood and is cool-headed, they can use their intelligence to solve the problem. On the contrary, a bad-tempered person will only make things worse when problems arise. All in all, the ability to keep a good mood is important for people in modern society.

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