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恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累高级词汇，拼写错误也要注意；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误。
How to become a smart consumer? As we all know,students are so careful about our money in daily life that they try their best to look for discounts.However,such as ,coupons,they can not bring us profits.Therefore, if we want to become a real clever consumer.we should do the following things. First of all ,we should have the right judement to choose some discounts.That is ,we can compute the discount of the coupons by our knowledge.Then,we decide if we go to buy products.Third,we can look for group-buy deals.On the one hand,we can save some money.on the other hand ,many pepole would help you do some right shopping.And the most important is that we should keep calm when we face differernt attracted goods.By these way ,i think we can save much more money. In a word,being a smart consumer,we should make a right decision when we want to buy something by our common sense and scientific judgement.We all know that appropriate consume is the best way for us to save money.
