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As the saying goes,life is short.It is true that time waits for no men.We spend a lot of time analyzing and trying to fix things that aren't quite right.But we should spend more time on thing we do like. Life is short.Many people waste their time to do those insignicant stuff.It doesn't make any sense to life.Some people spend a lot of their playing the computer games or working by their computer.They chat with their family,fiends and customers via cellphone.They spend less time companing with their family.Thy even don't want to go out.They are bustling with many stuff everyday.However,there are few impressive things left in your whole life. Life is short.You don't even notice the existence of time when it vanishs from your life.The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.
