题目要求:
围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。
字数要求:
200字以内
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多。
in the era of increasing development , communication is in every where and every time .It is not denyed that comunication is indispensable to us in the society. Firstly, the earth not be possessed by only one of all us but all .So, if we don't communication with other, we are about to exist the earth. Then, comunication with each other is colossily needed to my own oneself, for it is helpful to adjust the relationship of both two who are now in the poor relationship. Finally, to achieve my dream, we also must comunicate with other coming from our around area or other area of domestic or even other country. In short, if you want to exist and achieve progress in the world, you must comunicate with other.