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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13034
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文中能较灵活地使用高级词汇,但词汇量积累还要努��。

用户练习作文:

In the era of increasing development, communication is in every where and every time .It can not be denied that comunication is indispensable to us in the society. Firstly, the earth not is possessed by only one of all us but all.So, if we don't communication with other, we are about to exist in the earth. Then, communication with each other is colossily needed to ourselves , for it is helpful to adjust the relationship of both two who are now in the poor relationship. Finally, to achieve my dream, we also must communicate with other coming from our around area or other area of domestic or even other countries. In short, if you want to exist and achieve progress in the world, you must communicate with other.

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