2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear John welcome to my hometown ,i know you like to climb the mountain , like to visit the temple ,like delicious foods , so I will show you to see the famous temple, and climb the 1200 metres above sea level, and cooking the dongpo port, spicy food . the temple is very interesting to talk about Qin dynasty stories . a lot of touris come to here to climb the mountain, it is a very famours travel place . you will be very happy if you come here travel . sincerely Jesse