2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear John Welcome to my hometown,I know you like to climb the mountain, like to visit the temple,like delicious foods, so I will show you to see the famous temple, and climb the 1200 metres above sea level, and cooking the dongpo port, spicy food. The temple is very interesting to talk about Qin dynasty stories. a lot of tourist come to here climb the mountain, it is a very famours travel place. you will be very happy if you come here for travel. Sincerely Jesse