2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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I happened to know that you are going to visit my hometown and I can't wait see you again.I miss everything when I was in your city,and your parents and you were so kind to me that I will try my best to make your stay an enjoyable one。 My hometown is Gansu.There arenumerous places and attractions worth recommending,and YueluMountain is the first one that I'd like to introduce to you.Firstly,in the foot of Yuelu Mountain is the prominent YueluAcademy.It has an exceedingly long history and its architecture ischaracteristic of Song Dynasty.Then,after a half hour,we willreach the Bird Forest.There are various rare birds there,and theycan sing,perform,and interact with us.After about an hour,wewill arrive at the peak,Baiyun Summit.The scenery there isspectacular and we can have a wonderful panorama of the wholecity。 Should you have any good suggestion,please let me know。 I am looking forward to you to arrivaring。