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作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇表达灵活；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用偏少。
some people think that financial disparity affects friendship.i think it is completely not true.in some sense,the real friendship is actually immune to financial diparity. first,it is necessary to clarify what's the real friendship.similar personality,common pursuit,appreciation from each other might cultivate the real friendship,meanwhile,long-term connection that might smooth up each other's slight disparity,get the common recognition is also crucial.gradually,the real friendship has been being in each other's heart.so it usually demands a long process to grow untill maturity. second,the friendship that are grounded on money is fully not the real friendship,which is pretty easy to change and not immune to various varied factors.in fact, ther are many relationships around us.for all businessmen,relationships are vital for their business,but most of them are actually not friendship.may be common interests are the main reason for them to go together.like this,if financial disparity varies,relationship also does third,the real friendship is everlasting and is tested by time.although occasionally there are some disputes between them,the friendship is never change. to sum up,financial disparity doesn't affect the real friendship,if it does,not the real friendship.
