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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40860
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;文章词汇多样性要提升,且请仔细检查词汇的拼写;采用了一些简单的从句。

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Everyone has faced-with many choises in whole our life.Such as, when you go shopping,you will see many cargos,but you do not know which you want to buy,because you like all them.But in fact,you must bemake a desicion.So, at that time,you do not know what should you do. For me,in the past,I'm always regirate whatever I do anying.Such as,buy food,have lunch,buy shoes,and, so on.However,I exchanged after go university. To be honest,I do not like English at all in before.But I happend study English.I rembered that I little study in Grend One.I always think what should I do.If I coontinue study English,so my time slliped reapiedly.Until my father told me that if you want do youcan do,but do not hesitate. Life is like this,if you hesitate,you will lost many things, and time. When you descion somethings, you should make a desicion right now.

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