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Everyone has faced-with many choises in whole our life.Such as, when you go shopping,you will see many cargos,but you do not know which you want to buy,because you like all them.But in fact,you must bemake a desicion.So, at that time,you do not know what should you do. For me,in the past,I'm always regirate whatever I do anying.Such as,buy food,have lunch,buy shoes,and, so on.However,I exchanged after go university. To be honest,I do not like English at all in before.But I happend study English.I rembered that I little study in Grend One.I always think what should I do.If I coontinue study English,so my time slliped reapiedly.Until my father told me that if you want do youcan do,but do not hesitate. Life is like this,if you hesitate,you will lost many things, and time. When you descion somethings, you should make a desicion right now.
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