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According to a survey,almost all the schools and colleges are rebuilding their campus: not only the teaching buildings but also the circumstance. In this way,I will discuss the importance of campus construction. A lot of efforts have been made to better the campus environment,in particular,the construction of a green campus. Many colleges have taken serious measures to build environmental friendly campus,such as lawns and tree-lined roads. However,in my view,this is only the initial step and we can do more. As the begin with,the schools and colleges may implement strict regulation of waste on campus: no matter the leftovers in canteens or the litter in classrooms. Moreover,on the student side,we can use green bags instead of disposable plastic bags and use more recycling bowls. In addition,the most important thing for everyone is that we should raise our awareness of environmental protection.