但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
My name is Mary. I’m a student in Yuying Middle School. There are two classroom buildings and a big playground in my school. Our classroom is very big.We have twenty-one boys and twenty girls in our class. I have many subjects, such as Chinese, math, English, music, art and so on. I like English very much, because it’s very easy and interesting. I often do sports with my classmates after class. My favorite sport is football. I think it’s good for my health.