2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦136:进城

但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

Li Hua’s parents worked on the farm, but now they found a job in the city. Li Hua had to go to school in the city. He studies in Xinhua High School now. At school he had some trouble in studying at first. However, he was lucky enough. With the help of the teachers and the students, he made great progress with his studies. Now he loves his teachers and classmates. He also loves his new school. He has a good time in the city.