2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(43)写作:沉溺于电脑游戏

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Dear Xiao Ming, How are you doing recently? I heard that you have been addicted to computer game lately.It made your grade fell down.I'm worry about you.Do you know it is very bad for you?So I want to help you,now,let me tell you something.First of all,computer game is not bad actually,I know it is interesting.But if you spend too much time playing it,that is bad and terrible.When the games are full of your brain,you'll forget your study,forget the homework,forget your friends,even forget what you should be.It makes you lose yourself and destory your future.Besides,It is bad for your health to take too much time to play computer.You maybe feel tired and weak when you turn off the computer.Stop it!Right now.You should take part in something valuable after your class.For example, you can play basketball,join the sports club or join some interest team in your school.There are so many things to do better than play computer game all the time.I believe you can do it,don't let me down,I hope that I'll hear the good news from you next time.