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文章上下文衔接自然；文中如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇，但请认真检查词汇的拼写。
My College---My New Life New life begins! I've been expecting this moment for a long time.Finally,I become a college student . All good things must come to an end ! I am now apart from my family members and many good friends.I am awared that I will have to do everything on my own . Being responsible is the exact thing that I am supposed to think about! I'm now dealing something responsibly with my new rommates.I enjoy being together with them,they just like my good friends in high school,being kind and thoughtful ! My college is a place for a new beginning ,I'm sure I'm taking a new life ,everything here is full of challenge,quite different from things in high school,teachers are not going to tell you exactly what you are going to do ,you will have to make your own decisions. So far,I'm geting along so well with people aroud me ,college provides me with chances and challenge,I'm going to make a difference to my life!And I have every confidence on myself.I will still have to move on.
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