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as time goes by, it becomes a bit hard for me to remember everything about myself at the first day of my college life. However, there was one thing for sure that I did feel quite excited and expect my new life. There is no doubt that students like me have struggled for a long time to be permitted to enter the university.Bringing with curiosity, I got into Hunan Women University. Generally speaking, it's an interesting and fantastic place for us to study and improve. Every day a series of outgoing people comes into my life. Curious and out of politeness, I'd talk to them heart to heart. Here I make friends with my new classmates from different places around China. What's more, time and weather permitting, I will enjoy jogging or playing basketball with my classmates on the playground, tired but happy. When staying in dormitory, I choose to read news online and sometimes watch a film for relaxing. However, a good student can never leave his study behind. When it comes to study, hard problems never upset me, instead they arouse me. Rather than ignoring it, I'd think carefully for a while and ask my classmates for help. To be honest, there are some things I don’t deal with properly. For instance, once I spent nearly a whole day playing computer games. Personally, we university students are already adults and it's our obligation to develop ourselves in college by learning new professional skills. Not until we take a right attitude towards our study and life can we win a rich and colorful experience in college.