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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46231
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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From above survey report data, we can learn that education pays in lower earnings and the higher unemployment rate. Peaple age 25 and over who have less than the high school diploma, there is 14.1% of them are unemployment state.Except these people who have jobs , in average, they can only earn about USD451 on one week. Peaple who has higher education degree are easy to find a job, and their salary are higher. We noted that the average median weekly salary of USD1665 was given to people who have professional degree, that is about six times compared to people's salary who have less than high school diploma. We should note another point , people who have the most highest degree earn less than people have professional degree, and the unemployment rate is higher than the people have professional degree. This does not means people who have higher degree but have the lower salary. This means that social need more peaple who have professional technology.

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