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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10534
要求:
题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
评语:

文中词汇使用灵活,可是在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。

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Anything has to come an end, so do my college life. Now I'm a junior student and spend three years in my college. To be honest, I donot like my college very much, but totally donot detest it. as time goes by, it becomes a hard for me to remember everything about first day of my college life. However, there was one thing for sure that I did feel quite excited and expect my new life. There is no doubt that students like me have struggled for a long time to be permitted to enter the university.Bringing with curiosity, I got into Hunan Women University. Generally speaking, it's an interesting and fantastic place for us to study and improve. Every day a series of outgoing people comes into my life. Curious and out of politeness, I'd talk to them heart to heart. Here I make friends with my new classmates from different places around China. What's more, time and weather permitting, I will enjoy jogging or playing basketball with my classmates on the playground, tired but happy. When staying in dormitory, I choose to read news online and sometimes watch a film for relaxing. However, a good student can never leave his study behind. When it comes to study, hard problems never upset me, instead they arouse me. Rather than ignoring it, I'd think carefully for a while and ask my classmates for help. To be honest, there are some things I don’t deal with properly. For instance, once I spent nearly a whole day playing computer games. Personally, we university students are already adults and it's our obligation to develop ourselves in college by learning new professional skills. Not until we take a right attitude towards our study and life can we win a rich and colorful experience in college.

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