可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者词汇基本功很好,在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用全文结构较为严谨。
Anything must to come an end, so do my college life. Now I'm a junior student, and I honestly don't like my college very much, but totally donot detest it. as time goes by, it becomes a hard for me to remember everything about first day of my college life. However, there was one thing for sure that I did feel quite excited and expect my new life. There is no doubt that students like me have struggled for a long time to get rid of my parents'bond.Bringing with curiosity, I got into Hunan Women University, which is an interesting and fantastic place for us to study and improve us. Every day some interesting people comes into my life. Curious and out of politeness, I'd talk to them heart to heart. Here I make friends with my new classmates from different places around China. What's more, time and weather permitting, I will enjoy running and playing tennis with my classmates on the playground, tired but funny. When staying in dormitory, I choose to read news online and sometimes watch a film for relaxing. However, I can't ignore my study. When it comes to study, hard problems never upset me, instead it is incentives for me. Rather than ignoring it, I'd think carefully for a while and ask my classmates for help. To be honest, there are some things I don’t deal with properly. For instance, once I spent nearly a whole day playing computer games. Personally, we university students are already adults and it's our obligation to develop ourselves in college by learning new professional skills. Not until we take a right attitude towards our study and life can we win a rich and colorful experience in college.