可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;请作者增加高级词汇的使用,单词拼写做的很好;全文结构较为严谨。
All good things must come to an end, so do my college. Now I'm a junior student, and I honestly don't like my college very much, but totally don't detest it. As time goes by, it becomes a hard for me to remember everything about first day of my college life. However, there was one thing for sure that I did be quite excited about my new life. There is no doubt that students like me have struggled for a long time to get rid of my parents'bond. Bringing with curiosity, I got into Hunan Women University, which is an interesting and fantastic place for us to study and improve us. Every day I can meet different people. Here I make friends with my new mates from different places around China and share some funny things with them . What's more, time and weather permitting, I will enjoy running and playing tennis with my classmates on the playground, tired but funny. When staying in the dormitory, I spend my leisure time with amazing book, interesting film and TV show. However, I also can't ignore my study. When it comes to study, hard problems never upset me, instead it is incentives for me. Rather than yielding to it, I'd think carefully for a while and ask my classmates for help. Of course, self-studying is a important ability for us to master in college To be honest, I can't manage my school time well to get efficient studying. For instance, once I spent nearly a whole day screening shopping website. Personally, our university students are already adults and it's our obligation to develop ourselves in college by learning new professional skills. We should enrich our life experiences and broaden our view.