2004年专业四级英语作文真题:电话与写信

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者句法知识扎实，但文中从句数量稍显不足；单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量。

Nowadays,young person choose to phone each other rather than writing letters. But even if so,I still maintain that letter writing will never be killed by phones,though we have stepped into the Information Age. Firstly,letters can express your subtle feelings. With the increase of the living pace of modern society,we find that there is a lack of communication now. Sometimes when you are speaking to someone that you care and love on the phone,you are so shy that it’s too hard to express any of your feelings towards him/her. Your throat seems to be blocked! At this time,letters will help. Without any embarrassment,you can just write down your deep concern and love on a piece of paper. When you drop the letter into the pillar-box,you will feel what he/she will receive is not only a letter,but also your deepest love. Secondly,letters can be kept as a record of memory,while phones cannot. Just imagine when you open an old box of letters and read them years later,a lot of beautiful and indelible memories will be brought back to you. What an irreplaceable feeling it is! And I believe,this feeling is something that you can definitely never experience through several phone calls. All in all,letter writing will absolutely survive and even thrive in the Information Age. Phones can never kill it,neither will anything.