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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12884
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分54.5分
评语:

文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;文中从句数量稍显不足,注意个别有错误的句子;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

the picture is so insinuative. at lunch time the parents want to tell their son who lives on the uostairs to have lunch but they talk to each other through internet? how long they don't see their son even? how long they don't have a face-to-face commuion? we use mobile phone and computer often in our life or work. but if we are at home we can talk our family members face to face and see each other in one day for many times. it is ordinary to surf the internet in rest time, take a long time to make a phone call with friend we can't meet reently, buy anything we want we need, play games with other players to kill time. however, at least, if we have lunch or dinner with parents, please put down the phone. our parents is so tired a day, they just want to see your face and ask you some interesting things you were sufferring and listen the laugh of you.

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