2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句使用量稍显不足；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

My home town is the capital og China Beijing. Beijing is not only a morden city but also an ancient city.If you go there,most people like you will be showed the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and HuTong which are three tags of the old Beijing.And what's the tag of morden city?I think all you can see on the streets is. The most interesting place in my home town is 798,which was a large out-of-service factory buildings,and now it is the marvelous art area.You can see many special things here,somebody do the cosplay,somebody make a woderful visual enjoyment,somebody make the strange staute.Whatever you can be given many fashion ideas .