3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
错误句子较少,可适当增加一些复杂句的使用;文中词汇丰富度不足,拼写检查也要重视;建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。
April 10 Dear Mr.and Mrs.Brown, I'm writing to you from my home in China.Thanks for your take care of me last year, I think I'm luck. In during , Your family gave me more helps, such as your family provided the room ,the foods, travel imformatio,.I have lived your home that likes live my home, you are my family. I never forgotten the happy time lived your home. I came back to China , I always rember your family. I'm looking forward your family tavel to China, my family and I are most welcome your family to China. I hope to keep up with yours. Yours faithfully, Li Hua