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How to make life more meaningful? In the modern economic society,we can do a lot of things to make like more meaningful , such as ,we set up our target is became an excellent teacher , we will take time to learn knowledge and try my best to teach students. Firstly we can share a lot of profensional knowledge to student. we need set up the target to ensure completely our plan,we need ensure we have good behaviors .