若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;作者词汇量提升空间很大,尤其要注意高级词汇积累,另外要注意个别拼写错误。
How to make life more meaningful? In the modern economic society,we can do a lot of things to make like more meaningful , such as ,we set up our target becaming an excellent teacher , we will take time to acquire knowledge and try my best to teach students. Firstly we can share a lot of profenssional knowledge to students. we need set up the target to ensure completely our plan,we need ensure we have good behaviors .