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从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；文中词汇表达不够丰富；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
How to make life more meaningful? In modern economic society,we can do a lot of things to make life more meaningful , such as if you are a teach , you will set up your target to became an excellent teacher, you will take time to acquire knowledge and try your best to teach students, you will share a lot of profenssional knowledge to students. if you are a factory manger, you will learn management skill to train your operator. anyway,you need set up the target to ensure completely your plan,you need ensure you have good behaviors .
