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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句。
In my opinion, in fact, happiness is very simple, all kinds of little things in life is happiness, such as eating a hearty dinner, take a look around the landscape, walking in the streets to observe people walking, thinking love our parents , and I live in this wonderful world, I can really feel I am very happy. Life is no shortage of well-being, happiness missing is found in the eye. As long as you feel happy, but where you are, you will feel very happy. But on the other hand, he insists his dream is a blessing, as long as there is a dream life, but how bad conditions, people will feel happy. I am very cruel, more brutal tomorrow, the day after tomorrow is very beautiful, but a lot of people have died in tomorrow night, the day after tomorrow the invisible sun, which is the good mood happy expectations, which means that do not give up! Adhere to the last and perhaps see the most beautiful sun, but do not insist on it definitely will not see! Stick to their dreams, believe in yourself tomorrow will live better than today, I believe I can have a better future, and has been unremitting efforts, I believe that happiness is in front of you.
