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2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(40)写作:中小学生健康问题

发布时间:2013-07-22 17:23浏览次数:433
要求:
近年来,中小学生健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请你用英语就该问题谈谈你的看法。
要求:
(1)内容包括
①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。

② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。


(2)字数:60---80词。


(3)短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
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In these yeas,there are more and more problems of the students' health.First,many more students have wear glasses on their face.Because they can't see things clearly,they got the eye's problem.Second,some students are always weak or tired.Because they lack of doing physical exercises.Third,there are always some disease around the children. If some children do not care of their health.They maybe get ill unfortunately.In all these cases,students should pay attention to their health.Keeping eyes in a proper distance while they are reading.They should do physical exercises at least one hour everyday.Parents and teachers should teach them how to keep healthy.Make them have good habits on the daily life.Such as wash hands before the meal,brush teeth twice everyday,go sleep early and get up early,and so on...

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