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2006年专四作文真题:存钱

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:27浏览次数:1983
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题目 My Idea of Saving Money
说明 Recently a Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700 students in Beijing, Guangzhou, Xi'an Chengdu, Shanghai, Wuhan, Nanjing, and Shenyang. The results have shown that 67 percent of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow's money today is better, what do you think?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分73.0分
评语:

句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

My Idea of Saving Money These days, with the development of economy,people's life become better and better.However I still hold the view that we are supposed to save money. There are several reasons.First of all,as the old saying goes,saving is the beauty in our tradition.thus,for our students,we ought to keep the good habit to save money.Besides,saving money can reduse our parents burden.As we all know, Chinese parents spend too much time on their children.If we can save some money,our parents will be more easy and pleased.What's more, it also can teach us how to make plan with our money.we can learn to use the money properly. Consequently, I really believe that we should save money.because nothing is limitless in the world.Everything should be limited.

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