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My Idea of Saving Money These days, with the development of economy,people's life become better and better.However I still hold the view that we are supposed to save money. There are several reasons.First of all,as the old saying goes,saving is the beauty in our tradition.thus,for our students,we ought to keep the good habit to save money.Besides,saving money can reduse our parents burden.As we all know, Chinese parents spend too much time on their children.If we can save some money,our parents will be more easy and pleased.What's more, it also can teach us how to make plan with our money.we can learn to use the money properly. Consequently, I really believe that we should save money.because nothing is limitless in the world.Everything should be limited.