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My views on Online Shopping With the development of e-commerce, shopping online becomes a new way of shopping which is getting more and more popular. Many citizens are likely to shop through internet nowadays. Generally speaking, shopping online offers lots of advantages with its convenience the most prominent. There are many commodities on the Internet where you can search whatever you want. Besides, you just click the mouse can you get all information you want, so that you don’t have to go to the shop personally. In addition, the commodities on the Internet are usually cheaper than the stores which can save much money. However, everything has two sides. You can not see the products or check their qualities and some of the sellers on the Internet are not so honest. And, for those who like shopping around different stores, shopping online perhaps will make them bored. From where i stand, shopping online has more advantages than disadvantages, and with the improvement of e-commerce, there will be more people to shop on the Internet.
