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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5519
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
要求
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰。

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These days many parents tend to make all decisions for their children for afraid that they might do something wrong.The parents' purpose is quite clear,to protect their kids from possible failures.But this practice turns out to make their children increasingly dependent on them. Form their children's development,parents should help them to be independent.The earlier they take measures to do so,the more benefit their children will get.Partents should first teach their children how to makes plan,an indispensable skill for their future survival.Partents should also give their children more freedom,a must to children's independence.If the children only follow rules set by their parents,they will never gain the sense of independence.Most importantly,parents should be open to different ideas from their children.If children feel that their ideas are well listened to and respected,they will become more confident. To sum up,parents should provide their children with plan making skill,freedom and respect.In this way,children will grow more independent.

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