2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

How to be a successful people？First you must know basical knowdge， otherwise it's hard to work in the team. You must learn how to improve team work。This seems more important especially in technical area. Suppose your parter asks you to check the design something ，but you really don't know this, how can you support or supervise him/her? Then they will not look you as a necessary member in the team. The manager will be fail! Opportunity is one of the elements of success。 However，if you want to achieve something, you must make efforts and get prepared. Otherwise, you will take no advantage of opportunities when they come。 In my opinion，the way to success is easy，if you do your best and grasp the chance！