2007年高考英语作文真题(广东卷):谁是你的偶像

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。

Last week, I did a survey among 2600 students on the "who is your idol" in one school. According to this investment, we are easy to find that there are a lot of differences between girls and boys on choosing who as their idols. The girls prefer to choose film stars rather than sports stars, but the boys are just opposite to them. The chart is also showed that the positions of parents are higher in girls' hearts than in boys' hearts. "parents" ranks the second for the girls while the forth for the boys. However, to our surprise, the percentage of the boys choosing "great figures" is the same as that of the girls. From the point of my view, parent is the first choice that I will choose because they give me life and raise me without complaints and regrets. In my heart, they are not only my parents but also my idol.