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假如你叫刘畅，你的朋友小明因为沉溺于电脑游戏，成绩日益下降。作为小明的朋友，你很担心，并决定给他写一封e-mail ,帮助他改掉这个坏习惯，好好学习。
3、你对小明的期望。
3、文中必须包括提示中所规定的要点，并可适当发挥。
作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Dear Xiao Ming, How are you doing recently? Both of us like to play computer games. As we know, playing computer game can improve our brain growth, and can extend our eye view. But I noted that you are addicted to playing computer games these days, and constantly you can not finish your homework in time. As your good friend, I want to remind you that it is not good for our health to sit in front of the computer too long. And it is not good for our eyes to spend too much time to play computer games. I advise you can do more physical exercises in your spare time. And you also can take part in our class activities, such as mountaincliming,swimming,camping and so on. These activities are good for our health and our mood. I hope you can adapt my suggestions, and have a good day. yours, Liu Chang
