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The day after yesterday my classmate is playing basketball when she get her leg badly injured ,and her leg was bleeding so she can't walk by herself .my teacher and i were took her to the hospital for checking.after that the doctor told us her leg can't be use until it's recoverd.therefor we have taken her back to our dormitory and take care of her.all the classmates came to see her and we decided to take care of her in turn.everyday we come to restaurant to bring the meal for her and we lent our notes to her,besides ,we often talk with her and make she happy.now,she is much better and will come back class with us soon. as far as i'm concerned ,this things teach me how important the care and love with each other.care and love is not only effect in our physical but also effect in our mental,but it's not single ,it should to be mutual.like the old saying goes"give rose to others ,you hands will have the remind smell"give the care and love to others and you will get more.
