高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中从句过少；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。

In the past,there were so many forests around my hometown.there were many fish in the river,too.The water was very clean.so we could see the fish clearly.Houses were very single .Streets were narrow.Everyone's life in our town was very busy but they were happy .They thought they could relaxed themselves for every time.But up to now,everything has changed.there are more and more high buildings built.Everyday,i'll see the heavy traffic in the roads.Many visitors from the whole world go shopping in my hometown.However,the environment is getting worse and worse.Forests and fish are less and less.So control environmental quetion is an important and rush thing.