2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear friend, I am very happy to hear that you will visit my hometown, my family and I want to show our sincerely welcome. My hometown is very beautiful and Hong Yegu is the most famous place which I want you to see. Hong Yegu grows a lot of sycamore trees. The leaves will turn red , when the autumn is coming . The whole mountain is red ,when you see from the long distence, its very becautiful.