托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺，单词拼写也要更仔细。

for me, i like both of them. country is fitting these old people, and city is fiting those young people. So, currently i am living in the city. in the city, i can have more opportunities and people can get better education and medical treament. You are arrounded by high education people. And enjoying better facilities. But, there are more persure for those people living in city. However, since we are young, why shouldn't we try our best to get better live. As for country, the quality of air is good, and live is simple there. but it's too hard to make you get rich , well, it's good for those people who have money and want to enjoy simple live.