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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13034
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
评语:

作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

用户练习作文:

Unicom aded a saying, communicate in anywhere, to advertise its phones. As we know, nowadays, almost nobody can live without phone. In order to communicate with others, God gave us tones, mouths, eyes, hands and so on. We should express our feelings when we are hurt by others. We should explain what do we think and what do we do when someone misunderstand us. We should tell others what they should do and what we want them to do. In a word, everyone should express his or her thinking. Parents and children, teachers and students, friends and friends, leaders and workers, all of them should communicate with each other that parents can understand what their children think, teachers can know about their students get or not, friends can feel their friends' hearts. In short, communication has a great signification in this world. It will last as long as we live.

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