雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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It's becoming very popular to travel abroad. I think it both has advantage and disadvantage. Firstly, the process of applying visa getting easier, some countires even open free. Which makes people go abroad easier than before. Traveling to other countries is really an amzing experience. You can feel different culture and atmosphere, in additional, you can taste food you never eat before, some stuff like that, it's totally worthwhile. In contrast, for some countries, we have a high currency exchange rate, by which cause the travel expensive. Like one cola may charge for 18 RMB in America. what's more, language maybe a big problem for those who can't speak English. So they could only travel with agency, which will make the travel leisurely. After all, I perfer to travel abroad. The world is so big, I would love to see.