小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强。

I have a friend whose name is bob,he is a handsome man and he has a black hair, he also is a honest man ,he never says lie . We usually walk to a river which behind his huose ,we play water,catch fish,there is our free place .I love him.